I think your presentation was good but it didn't bring in the New Zealand part in WW1, which is a pity. Could you please go back and add some more informational slides about some of the campaigns New Zealand fought in and information around this. It will be of interest to your audience.
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I think your presentation was good but it didn't bring in the New Zealand part in WW1, which is a pity. Could you please go back and add some more informational slides about some of the campaigns New Zealand fought in and information around this. It will be of interest to your audience.
Good effort so far.
Miss H
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