Gracious, you have a great topic and wonderful ideas for this speech topic. I think you need to go back and fix up some grammatical errors e.g when to use 'a' or 'an'. You use 'an' if the next word you write starts with a vowel, like ...an apple.
I also think you need to put in some more punctuation, so your sentences make sense. I will put my suggestions in blue.
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Gracious, you have a great topic and wonderful ideas for this speech topic. I think you need to go back and fix up some grammatical errors e.g when to use 'a' or 'an'. You use 'an' if the next word you write starts with a vowel, like ...an apple.
I also think you need to put in some more punctuation, so your sentences make sense. I will put my suggestions in blue.
Miss H
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